First+Song

First Draft of first song.

I'm not really done with the instrumental for this song the siren sounds kind of whiney so I'll probably play with it a little and add stuff. It might bot sound the same for the final project the voice would come in at about :20... I also have to fix the bass its off time because I'm rhythm challenged even though I play the drums...its sad media type="file" key="HIP FINAL BEGINING.mp3" width="240" height="20" INSTRUMENTAL

Soooooo I'm pretty much done with this song so I'll post it I'm in the process of doing the solo so I'll put that u[ later but I HAVE VOCALS NOW here it is: the whole thing without the solo...........the singer wants to remain nameless you can hear my voice in the background at one point and you should ignore it media type="file" key="HIP FINAL BEGINING done COMPLETE.mp3" width="240" height="20"<--PRETTY MUCH DONE

this beat has very blusey and sinister feel. it has a siren kind of sound to symbolize crime and being lured like the sirens in the odysessy. Also, I want like a really soulful, gospel type singer for this.

Lyrics:

Can you hear that Siren callin'? They sung for poor Johnny, said come on down and try a taste of the fruit from the devils tree

They said, Johnny, Johnny, won't you come with me Johnny, Johnny, let your mind run free

Blinded by their warning lights, lured him with their song, he felt his toes lift off the ground, as he rose up into wrong.

Johnny's, Higher, higher, he don't care no more higher, higher, he just wants to soar

Mama said, my heart can't take losing you as she lies awake she said don't come back, and don't come home, I can't love you till the devils gone.

She pleaded Johnny no, Johnny no, no, no It's too late you gotta go, go, go I said she'll break your heart, she'll take your soul, but dont you come back until the devils gone.

she said she'll break your heart, she'll take your soul, but don't you come back till the devils gonerepeat 2x


 * Guitar Solo* (hopefully)

Mama's heart can't take much more So Johnny's gotta go. go, go she said don't come back, and don't come home, I can't love you till the devils gone.

Johnny's Higher, higher, he don't care no more. Higher, higher, he just wants to soar.

Mama said, my heart can't take, losing you as she lies awake. she said she'll break your heart, she'll take your soul, but don't you come back till the devils gone.

she said she'll break your heart, she'll take your soul, but don't you come back till the devils gone.


 * Foreshadowing gunshot ends track*