Third+Song

Soooo I am in no way done with this song yet. It was originally going to be for guitar but maybe I'll add it later. This is the instrumental for the first two verses and choruses. Im thinking of doing a kind of synth solo for the third verse because I think this beat would make a sick dubstep.

this is drastically different than what I was going for in the beginning I was going for like a soft rock acousticish<---(cool word to say out loud) like melancholy sound and ended up with dubstepy elctro something but I'm not complaining. Just started it wednesday this is a rough draft no bass yet.

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Lyrics:

Verse 1: Don't stop the bullet when it comes we'll all be the same

refused to move consumed I watched my paradise go up in flames

My God don't know me he just left me lonely

while she drags me down my time feels shallow now but I'm fine

Bridge: and its killing me that I'm so dying to please

let the sun set over me and free me from my greed

Chorus: God said I'm sorry, I just don't have the time so turn yourself back turn yourself back

listen to the fear its been screaming in your ears saying turn yourself back turn yourself, but wait I'm fine

Bridge 2: the state of my mind is drifting into decline

she keeps my heart from beating left me in bits and pieces

Verse 2: I feel I do no wrong with her every kiss stings like a cure

now I'll talk if my god won't my words going up in smoke

I won't give a second thought to feelings torn but now forgot

when time slows to pass me by-eh I don't like this line find myself staring at the sky

Bridge: and its killing me that I'm so dying to please

let the sun set over me and free me from my greed

Chorus: God said I'm sorry, I just don't have the time so turn yourself back turn yourself back

listen to the fear its been screaming in your ears saying turn yourself back turn yourself, but wait I'm fine I'm fine I'm....fine