Mary

I decided to do a story for my final project. It's not going to be very long because I'm not going to have time to finish it, but it will probably be longer than a short story. It's from two different points of view. One is a girl named Avery and the other is a guy named Owen. They're in the summer before their senior year of college and they are at a leadership convention competing for an internship opportunity. Avery is meant to be a strong leading character and Owen is there to give perspective on how she appears to other people.

Chapter 1 is Avery's point of view. It's really rough and needs a lot of work. Any sugestions on how to describe Bianca?