Lindsey

Hi, everyone! For my project I'm working on a story (hopefully to be a novel). I'm really interested in crime solving and justice, so that's the main theme of the story.

It revolves around Scarlett, a bored, unmotivated genius with no aspirations after high school. After inadvertently bringing down a serial killer, she is offered an internship with New York City's FBI team. While she's adjusting to living in the city, dealing with her dyfunctional family, and discovering her passion of crime fighting...she meets a guy. A guy dealing with issues of his own, and a guy who just might ruin everything.
 * Synopsis**

Really, anything goes. The main things I want to know are:
 * Feedback**
 * how my character development is
 * whether my plot/idea is consistent and makes sense
 * whether it's interesting and enjoyable to read
 * and any suggestions for future situations/happenings

Thanks so much!

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